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probably the best 11 seconds of my life.

lol what was that?!??

LolHi responds:

Awesomeness, that's what it was.

wicked

Not to shabby man. the bass line seems to distort tho. what software r u using?

NedenAnimator responds:

thanx
i used acid pro for that song. lol

not bad not bad!

Surprisingly kool man, did you do the guitar and organ yourself or used samples?

NedenAnimator responds:

samples. i cnt play instraments =( lol so i use programs/ loops. haha
wish i cud tho ey...

Sick!

Poopsmacclaude - you have no idea what your talking about. In fact a lot of R&B artists of late are bringing the chipmunk style voice back. Are you calling the holders of #1 Singles such as Akon and thoes of his caliber old fashion? Heard of a song titled 'Lonely' before?

So STFU and do some research before you pass judgment on shit you don't know what your talking about.

In actual fact, its an awesome effect and brings a real contrast to rapping and singing (in a normal tone), I would have liked to see some rapping or singing however - perhaps in an updated version you will have some.

I decreased the speed of the song, to discover a pretty decent voice man. Why don't you record a few versus and fill in the gaps or make a colab with myself or someone who's keen to sing.

Love that beat dude! Keep them coming.

QuirkyIV responds:

Thanks man
You really know music
and yeah a revised version will be coming

i actually am coming out with a mixtape

Respect

Wicked track man..
Your harmony is flawless.. noticed one flat note around 2:30 tho.

5/5 Respect.

kenubo responds:

lol, yeah. It was all done in a half day. I should've put more time into it before I posted it. Thanks again for the review!

crazy kool

I 5'd it!
This has a crazy coolness to it.
The venetian snares worked really well with the ambient piano!

Nice job!

nubbinownz responds:

Thank you very much. I always admired the way VSnares cut his drum samples. Someday I hope to have it down as well as he does.

review

I wouldn't rate this song i'm afraid.
I like the beat but the snare wasn't right for the song and the percussion never changed - there wasn't even any fill-ins!.
Change the saxophone to a hip bass line, get rid of that ridiculous sliding effect at 0:17secs, and add some background music.

keep trying!

MoniMC responds:

mmkay thanks

wat?

Did you sign up to NG solely to submit this song?
hehe this song would be funnyer, if you tried to sing IMO.

O-K-Gay responds:

I do enjoy company.

Word

This is a very slick demo dude.
Some ideas for its development if you will..

- Put some modification in the string such as a light flange.
- Increase the compression when the kicks start coming in. The kick is powerful
so the music around it should fade slightly with every kick.
- The bass line between 1:09 and 1:22 needs turning down.

XenoxX responds:

Thanks A lot For the review and I will keep all these point in Mind when it comes to the final piece. Once again thanks you!

XenoxX :)

Yuck.

This song makes me want to kill myself.

afuckingname responds:

beacuse youre a faggot?

Jared Whittington @JaredW

Age 36, Male

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NZ

Joined on 2/21/08

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