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JaredW

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off the hizzey ma nizzey

distortion

Nice work dude.. Would be mint for a better quality audio file to be uploaded, Its pretty hard to listen to 4 mins of distortion.

Guitar

This is a nice piece, but the guitar sounds pretty synthesized. You should do it with a real guitar.

MaestroRage responds:

hey JaredW!

True enough the guitar is synth, with a bit more practice it may have been more realistic. However we don't really have a guitar, and neither of us know how to play it, so i'm afraid for now real life guitar performances are out of the question.

That and we wouldn't have the recording equipment necessary to record a decent acoustic guitar track.

Thank you for the review, we're glad you liked it!

Mastering

Fine tune your top E string, and sing a little louder. Think you might need a better mic.
Sounds like a pretty mean song tho. You got a pretty mean voice and the lyrics are pretty deep. nice.

mellow8888 responds:

Thank's alot man, yeah those strings I got on there are pretty old so it gose out of tune easily, I'll sing louder next time to ha it was late at night when I recorded this so yeah, and yep the mic I have now is kinda shitty I'll upgrade eventually.
But anyway I'm really glad to hear you like it though ^_^

Excellent

Nice job dude.. Hoping there would be a little more variation with your drums tho. 5/5

Nav responds:

Yeah, I could've done a bit more, but I thought it came out alright!

Thanks for the review :D

This is more like it..

After reviewing another piece of your work, I decided to have a look through some of your other stuff. Nice man, This is more like it! Make a full version.

Trancey? Not Very.

One could debate this track would be a classified as techno...
I didn't actually find this very inspiring at all. The bassline sample struggled to hit thoes low notes, And there needed to be a lot more variation that the one or two bars that repeat over and over.

YM SINEP SI EGUH B===============================D

I'm guessing this was one of your ealier pieces, I can see you were fucking round and its pretty funny, but jokes aside, what you did with thoes synths was actually pretty kool haha.. I'd like to hear this remade with obviously a revised piano sample, bassline, percussion etc..

Hmm

Percussion: Download some plugins!
Synthisizers: Download some plugins!!!
Production and Mastering: Could use a little work but this song has potential to be pretty mean acid/goa/psy trance.

Download some VSTi's mate. I suggest Pro-51, and V-Station to start off with

Jared Whittington @JaredW

Age 37, Male

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NZ

Joined on 2/21/08

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